Like a river it flows
With a single coy, all alone
Although at times
It acts as wild vines overgrown
It's been with you forever
But it's only been a few years with me
Your parents may dislike it
But your friends disagree
Some say it's average
Some say it's odd
But I am not some
And I say it's lovely
And when it snows outside
The snow rests all over it
I notice and laugh
As you shake your head in a fit
You look up at me
And I look at you
Through the front of it
Through my glasses, too
Some say it’s average
Some say it’s odd
But I am not some
And I say it’s lovely
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3 comments:
nice rhyme scheme is it about you (noticed glasses phrase) i like the combination of rhyme and nature symbolism.
I like how this piece relates back to the opening sentences. You try to figure out what the writer is trying to symbolize. i also love how the writer talks about not being average and accepting that. Great piece!!! =D
I like your use of imagery and your ability to rhyme. It flows nicely
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